Mordhau

Art boys only

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@Monsteri said:
Btw criticism welcome

youre moms ghay

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Is criticism to state that you are fucking awesome at this?

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@Monsteri said:
Btw criticism welcome

Remove arc tracers

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@King Sinclair The FluffyDragon said:
It needs more fur.

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  • 29 Jul
 Sir Zombie

@Monsteri said:
Btw criticism welcome

You are bad at Mordhau

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  • 29 Jul
 Survii

@TheKingInTheNorth said:
lmao it actually got deleted

this is kink shaming

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@Monsteri said:
Color practice with blend brushes

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He blends too much with the background imho, if you made it more contrasting, like much darker and colder, you wouldn't have to add such thick lines in the lower part

Probably the shadow isn't dark enough, I'm not particularly good at that myself tbh
I think this vid had some stuff on this

Also you pushed too hard with that giant wrinkle on his face, it stands out too much. You should tone it down imho

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Eye itself is pretty good imho, well done but the position seems a little bit off to me. Or it lacks a dept between eye and the nose.

Neck seems a little flimsy to me and too 2D imho. Could "turn" it more as my sculpture proff say, to add the 3D effect on it.

Also seeing the left shoulder a little would feel more natural unless it was intended like that, our bodies hardly stands that perfectly to side to hide the shoulder like that in poses.

Just my 2 pleb artsie schmeckles.
Pretty nice overall imho tbh

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  • 29 Jul
 Goof

Shadows seem a little under saturated, but that's just me.

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  • 29 Jul
 Xekratos

@Rattsknecht said:

@Monsteri said:
Color practice with blend brushes

ranndul5.png

He blends too much with the background imho, if you made it more contrasting, like much darker and colder, you wouldn't have to add such thick lines in the lower part

Probably the shadow isn't dark enough, I'm not particularly good at that myself tbh
I think this vid had some stuff on this

Also you pushed too hard with that giant wrinkle on his face, it stands out too much. You should tone it down imho

Rat! I'm gonna be taking a beginner's drawing class for college soon so I will learn how to actually draw well. Thought I'd let you know because you have good art and give pointers often.

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  • 30 Jul
 Monsteri

@Rattsknecht said:
He blends too much with the background imho, if you made it more contrasting, like much darker and colder, you wouldn't have to add such thick lines in the lower part

Also you pushed too hard with that giant wrinkle on his face, it stands out too much. You should tone it down imho

The background is like that cause I just wanted to focus on the face -- but it is an erroneous approach in the end, as each color needs its context, it is true. I added a proper background and made many other adjustments.

The wrinkle was there because I wanted to make an 'atypical' face. You'll notice upon closer inspection that the skull is balloony and protruding very unnaturally, it's hidden quite well I think. The wrinkle ended up being too much though, so I toned it down as well.
Added visible other shoulder and some depth to the neck and whatnot. Thanks for feedback guys, it did greatly improve.

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  • 30 Jul
 Rattsknecht

It's infinitely better now, good job!

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  • 30 Jul
 Rattsknecht

@Xekratos said:

@Rattsknecht said:

@Monsteri said:
Color practice with blend brushes

ranndul5.png

He blends too much with the background imho, if you made it more contrasting, like much darker and colder, you wouldn't have to add such thick lines in the lower part

Probably the shadow isn't dark enough, I'm not particularly good at that myself tbh
I think this vid had some stuff on this

Also you pushed too hard with that giant wrinkle on his face, it stands out too much. You should tone it down imho

Rat! I'm gonna be taking a beginner's drawing class for college soon so I will learn how to actually draw well. Thought I'd let you know because you have good art and give pointers often.

Is that an art collge?

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  • 30 Jul
 Monsteri

I can't stop

I'm going on a journey of self-discovery

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  • 30 Jul
 Punzybobo

@Monsteri said:
I can't stop

I'm going on a journey of self-discovery

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you gave him shitposting nose

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  • 30 Jul
 Xekratos

@Rattsknecht said:

@Xekratos said:

@Rattsknecht said:

@Monsteri said:
Color practice with blend brushes

ranndul5.png

He blends too much with the background imho, if you made it more contrasting, like much darker and colder, you wouldn't have to add such thick lines in the lower part

Probably the shadow isn't dark enough, I'm not particularly good at that myself tbh
I think this vid had some stuff on this

Also you pushed too hard with that giant wrinkle on his face, it stands out too much. You should tone it down imho

Rat! I'm gonna be taking a beginner's drawing class for college soon so I will learn how to actually draw well. Thought I'd let you know because you have good art and give pointers often.

Is that an art collge?

No but the teacher is like a professional artist and stuff like that and I've heard great things from him from a friend I have who took the same class. Super pumped.

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Is that supposed to be jax?

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@Monsteri said:

@Rattsknecht said:
He blends too much with the background imho, if you made it more contrasting, like much darker and colder, you wouldn't have to add such thick lines in the lower part

Also you pushed too hard with that giant wrinkle on his face, it stands out too much. You should tone it down imho

The background is like that cause I just wanted to focus on the face -- but it is an erroneous approach in the end, as each color needs its context, it is true. I added a proper background and made many other adjustments.

The wrinkle was there because I wanted to make an 'atypical' face. You'll notice upon closer inspection that the skull is balloony and protruding very unnaturally, it's hidden quite well I think. The wrinkle ended up being too much though, so I toned it down as well.
Added visible other shoulder and some depth to the neck and whatnot. Thanks for feedback guys, it did greatly improve.

ranndul6.png

give him a bigger dick

its too small

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  • 4 Aug
 slutman

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 Runagate

rob owner would be proud

and of course he was the first one to like it